Awesome to the max.
It's funny, I really got a feeling of "Home Movies" from this, and then I looked into your older flash submissions to find just that! The writing was great. I know you said you wrote what first came to mind, but that method seems to work for you and it doesn't come across as forced so that's a bonus. Your animation looks professional, and I think you could definitely get your own series on television if you kept at it. Good luck with everything, and I really can't wait to see more from you!